littleyellowkuma

Hi, I LOVE when people experiment with structure. This interesting drop structure is so strong and immediately brings people into the poem. I love the word vial, it's such an ...

Hi, I think that if you elaborated on the mask idea it would make the poem more dynamic. If you mention it, especially in the opening of your poem, I ...

Hi, I like the components in this, I think what you did with the capitalization really supports the meaning of the poem. How I personally interpreted it is that you ...

Hi~ I love love love the concept of this. I hate love poetry it often seems forced and cheesy but this is so beautiful and such a sophisticated way of ...

Hi, I see the meaning behind your poem, and think that a lot of hard work and effort went into the making of it, but your use of constant end ...