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littlemissgluttonous

  • Script » General, General Re: Fratricide

    I disagree, being in the same room with that effed up brother could turn anyone crazy, fast. Especially if herb just saw his brother killed. What I don't understand is ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Fickle Afternoon

    I love this poem; I love the whimsicle manner and the story it tells, though it seems slightly erratic. and as for punctuation: all or none. You have a commas ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: True Freaks

    Hello again. I wake up, turn on my gateway and drift to this website, and you're on the "featured works" at the bottom. SO you're poem... you don't need a ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Twilight : The real story

    Omg god you are a genius. When I become a millionare im hiring you to write the script and produce this movie. Its hilarious, and whoever doesnt think so is ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Oh my god

    I like the reworked version.. and good for you, changing the wording around to make the poem stronger. I get so sick of people who put their things up for ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: For those lost souls..

    I really like this poem, it definitely encompasses the essence of those who know what the death of someone close to you feels like. broken faith it feels like someone ...

    Mar 31, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Teenage Angst in Classical Greece: America 1920s-1940s

    Maybe this is my fault for refusing to warm up to a character like this, or maybe its my lack of sleep. Singing for six hours with a cold and ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Them

    First, let me say that all the commments I made tonight were grumpy and contrary to opinion. I don't agree with what you wrote. I don't believe we there are ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Chapter 1 - Harry Who?

    I'm sorry for not liking your work, really I am, but I hate everything about Kyra. The name, first of all, sounds like you stole it from an anime. I ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Falling Hard...

    I really liked that poem. Collage-poem. It strikes the right chords, painting images of our modern world in disconnected lines that do make a good story. Then Miss Teen USA ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Liar, Thief

    Okay, first person Yess. Obviously, no one else is dedicated to this forum. Or else they have a life... Okay, I like this poem. It's a little remniscent of Torn, ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Death of A liberator - corected spelling

    I really liked this story, though I'm not a big fan of history concerning world war II. But this was really exceptionally. My one annoyance was, "forever young?" Like that ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: The Purpose of Humankind

    I would like to agree with you, being very pro-earth preservation and feel that future generations need to reap our benefits, not suffer our irresponsibilities, but I also believe that ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Heart

    WOOT first person to review. Nothing I enjoy more than ruining your dreams before anyone else! Just kidding. I really like your first and last stanzas. It got a little ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: First Shakespearean Sonnet Attempt - No Title Yet

    I can relate to sonnets. I had the greatest teacher in sixth grade who helped us create a whole book of poetry. This year and last year all we did ...

    Mar 12, 2009


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