listeningforthemuse

I'd like some constructive critiscisms and tips for polishing Thanks! Enemies Trapped within themselves So deep, that they don’t want help And yet, I see their cries Written on the ...

I need help with some of the wording A bit of polishing, too Thanks! The Ballad of the Trees Swaying in the breeze How graceful are the trees Numerous, their ...

How We're Spending Friday Night... So here we all sit. The television dancing in colored lights before our eyes. A headache slowly pulses into my mind, But I can't stop. ...

The wind whispers my name in the night. I feel its gentle breath upon my skin, as it glides o'er the floor, creeping in, 'Come, come' it murmurs in my ...

I wrote this from one of my character's point of view and I liked it. But I feel like something's not quite right.... Any and all opinions are welcome! ******************************** ...

My most recent song, pretty self-explanatory. I know its kinda short. Hope you like! (please comment!) verse: I’ve tried to play your games And I’ve lied to myself everyday To ...