lilymoore

Whoah! Knightly, you spooked me there. I happen to adore “Love Not Me for Comely Grace” so when I read your first line (without reading the spoiler) I almost thought ...

I feel I’ve been liking way too many pieces today but I LIKE so I shall like it. :D I think you have a great character worked up here. She’s ...

Whoah! Hey there AnubisPineapple! That sure is some very large font that you’ve got there. It’s definitely eye catching but from a readers point of view, it’s a bit too ...

Aww, Eli Belly! I can’t wait to see what happens to your writer-ness when you kiss the boy. Like, whoah! I do have a few nitpicks though. After living through ...

Hello there, NerdBurger! The names lilymoore, nice to meet you! *shakes hands* So, I want to start off by saying that you have a really nice poem here. It took ...

Hey there, Leonie! Glad to see you back and posting on the site. ^.^ So right off the bat, I want to say that I love the idea in this ...

Hey there, CuteJackRussel! *busts out the giant red pen* Shall I begin? :D Okay, I actually don’t think I’ll be putting any red marks on this, except perhaps this lil’ ...

Hey there, Obsessed! So, I’m not going to sit here and focus much on nitpicks. In fact, I won’t focus on any at all. Really, there aren’t any to focus ...

MilkNCookies gave you a wonderful review, dreams, and pointed out literally, like, everything that I had planned to point out as well. But I do want to touch on the ...

Anger! *glomp* Hey there! So, I did see a few typos here and there but mostly those just involved some places where you forgot an s at the end of ...

Hello, Atticus! Welcome to YWS and I hope you’re enjoying your time on the site! :D So, I have one little comment about a specific line: If I could leave ...

Hey there, my team mate! If a review is what you want, then a review is what you get! *plus you just turned me on to this awesome song so ...

Hehe. This did actually surprise me because I was expecting something not quite like this. It’s very short (which does make it hard to review a bit) but there’s still ...

Hey Eli! I meant to get to you a lot sooner with this but I didn’t even have time at work the other day (when I first received your PM) ...

Jagged, how is it you always seem to write the most impressive of pieces? There’s something very powerful in the way you’ve used such basic language to paint such lovely ...