lilymoore

Honestly Kamas, these are both wonderful poems and from my ability with poetry, which isn’t much, I can honestly say that this is pretty freakin awesome! The Leaf is probably ...

Hi there infinite reality! Okay, you’re very new and I would recommend you stop by the Welcome Forum and leave a post about yourself in order to get to better ...

Wow Penzipop do I neglect my WRFF threads. I totally spaced it out my dear. I’m very sorry. But I’m not going to nitpick too deeply at this for one ...

Hey pudin! Here as requested! Okay, this has been overall picked apart already but I want to really just reinforce a few things. First off there’s the emotion in the ...

Snoink is always good at making the most interesting remarks. But there was something else that I wanted to touch on and that is your use of the dog throughout ...

Hey there ofir! So let’s get down to business. I started working on this review way back at the beginning of school and it last hour and I’m finally done…I’ve ...

I know I’m late, but I still felt it would be a good idea to give my recommendations and nitpicks on the piece in order to help you out in ...

Hey aszx. So first of all, I really only read this because the title reminded me of that one song by The Fray and I didn’t think I would want ...

Hey Rosey Posey! Here to review as always. So right off the bat, I’m going to say poetry isn’t my strongest as far as reviewing goes, but I’m gonna do ...

Hey there Hey! So, first off, I'm really glad I'm not 25 yet, cause I don't think I want to get that close to being 50. That seems so old. ...

Wow bolt, this truly is the worst thing I've ever read in my entire life. And billy totally reminded me of that time we changed our Custom Titles so we ...

This is just too cute. The minute you mentioned the water bowl, I started thinking to myself *huh???? :? But I did find one other little mistake. “Oh for god ...

Hey Slodester! So, lets start with the nitpicks! I’d like to know your name Because I can’t be to blame If you won’t wear a nametag. Here, I would recommend ...

Stella! Eek! *tacklenomsnuggleglomps* This is so amazingly adorable and I was sitting in Math saying nothing but ‘awwwww’ through the whole poem. I actually wanted to go back in and ...

Hey there Silversun! So, I have to say that not only did you spark my interest in this contest but you definitely created something very powerful and extremely well constructed ...