lilyflower45

this poem flows very well, and it draws the reader in from the very first line. "by grace of the maniac with a mind adrift?" this line just has something ...

This poem is well written, but it did not grab my attention very well. i did like it, but its very monotone. I really liked the line "and forever is ...

this poem really makes you think. the topic is one that really just makes you question everything. i likes the imagry you used. "crack, chew and spit" this line stands ...

i love this. the imagry is sharp, and it shows alot about the author, and the speaker. if you can, ttry to emphesize the feelings even more than you already ...