lilmisssunshine13

The enter button is your friend. It is dizzying to try and read a piece as long as this that lacks seperate paragraphs. Paragraphs not only seperate thoughts, but they ...

well, I thought it was crude at first, but then as I read more, I found it kind of funny. I really like the ending where he states that men ...

This is a really great piece and definetely captures the turmoil of the mind. Which I assume is what you were going for. I want to congratulate you on the ...

I really love the repetition of deja vu in this poem. It really enhances the pain of it. You reallly have fun with the word play when you read this ...

Hey! Great job! This has great potential to be hard-hitting. I think to make it more effective you could combine sentences so that if flows easier, rather than having the ...

"But the thing that bothered me, I mean besides that no one else seemed to register the corpse and the man who had shown me was gone, were her eyes." ...