lilchoma

i feel like this poem is supposed to mean something, but i don't really get it. it is very well written in terms of language; it is very poetic. but ...

very very good poem. first two lines and i was hooked, i had a vivid image in my head, and that takes talent, you know: when your reader doesn't even ...

i agree with scottieRAWR that this is quite a depressing poem, and i would encourage you to pursue happier thoughts, hard as that may be for you. however, i will ...

okay so i liked this poem alot, in terms of it was just really cute talking about little things that kind of defined the time you grew up in, and ...

i really really like this poem, you know. I mean, despite its length or rather lack thereof, you really made it work. I don't think it would need to be ...

well a little rant is a perfect title for this peice...and usually listening to people complaing isn't very fun...but i didn't mind it in this peice really. i mean, after ...

wow, this was a really nice peice. i mean, it was crazy intense and all, but in a good way. even though i have read thousands or poems, books, and ...

wow, that was really spiffy. it was confusing obviously, but it was so much fun to read, that i didn't even mind. it was definately unique, but it was also ...

awww...this was a really sweet story, and i really enjoyed reading it. the way you described everything really pulled me into the story, and kept me there the whole time, ...

i really like was alot of fun to read because the imagery was so vivid, you did a really nice job on your descriptions. i'm sorry I can't really take ...

i really liked was very well written, and though some people commented on your repetition as a negative aspect, I rather enjoyed it. I thought the repetition was just part ...

this is a really sweet poem...it's just so much fun to read, and there is a certain tranquil, joyful atmosphere about it that i love. i can only make one ...

aww...this is a really nice poem. i mean, the content is pretty normal stuff, the kind of things that everyone thinks about, in terms of time passing by, but you ...

wow, this poem is really good. it's so sad, but at the same time it is so encouraging and hopefull my favorite part is the last four lines: "Sweet child ...

Nice job on this poem. It's a good reminder to all of us of the little things that we take for granted every day, and it's really thought provoking. These ...