lil-mizzkitty1

I really liked this piece and i think it's really cool you used writers block to inspire you. Kitty

Welcome to YWS! This was a powerful and gripping poem. And you got your message across in a great way. You could improve the way your lines are but that ...

Hi everyone i just wanted to thank everyone who has reviewed this poem, you've been a real help :D Kitty

I love your poem it's theme is so inspiring. I love the motto though i do agree it does have a childish edge to it. Kitty

Wow it was really nice story and you must have had a lot of talent when you were in 6th grade. I will definetly read your edited version if you ...

Wow this poem was so dark. Exactly the kind the poem I like. it was so dark and intriguing. From Kitty :D

Hi.... Kitty here!! i liked this poem alot!! it has a very christmasy feeling. I also like your use of description. PM me if you have any queries :D Bye

Wow...You'rE just great!! It's so sweet :D.

HIIIII! I just wanted to say that i love this story and i wait for its new chapters. Keep writing :D Best wishes Kitty

Hey I really love this story. i love Anita she is really strong-willed and also very sweet. Prince Alex wish i could find out more about his story..Elise? loved there ...

hey , I like this idea a lot. i wish i could come up with these kind of stories. i agree with Libra Loo. it is a coming of age ...

hey i liked this story a lot. kinda cliche but its great and i loved your style and its true boys just don't cry in public its just there thing. ...

Hey evi , i really don't have much to say but i had to congratulate you. i love this idea. i mean it was great also nice ending. bye are ...

that was just ... too fantastic for words. adorable sweet painful and you think there are parents who have to struggle like this. again that was just breathtaking. lil-mizzkitty1

hi love the story. great setting. i almost felt as if i was there. the description was is very sad that the boy's mum and dad die in tragic circumstances. ...