Published November 4, 2009
I've kind of lost interest in my last story, but might go back to it at some point if the writer's block for it goes away, and if the inspiration comes back. I'm sorry if I've upset anyone, but I like this new idea and promise to stick with it.
So an introduction to this idea?
Kiersten [Keer-stin] Kavanagh [Kuh-Van-Uh] or [Kavven-uh] has wanted nothing more than to leave New York City and travel to Hollywood to pursue her dreams as an indie singer. When her parents promise this trip on her 17th birthday, meaning during summer break, Kiersten couldn't be more happy that she'll be living up to her dream.
But, things take a turn for the worst when the Kavanaghs take an unexpected detour to the one place Kiersten would kill to be away from...
Ireland.
There, she's stuck on her grandparent's farm with only a guitar and a very angelic voice.
Everyday she'd escape to the Irish mountains paved with roses to sing her songs, hoping some Hollywood scout would miraculously be stranded on those damned hills too, and would whisk her away to California.
Though instead of a talent scout, she meets Aiden MacKenna, who may be a little closer to her family than she thinks.
Over the course of the summer, Kiersten learns more about her family roots and where she truly came from, who Aiden MacKenna really is, and why her parents really brought her to Ireland.
So hopefully it sounds intriguing?
If you all have any title suggestions, I'd appreciate that too!
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This kind of story is right up my alley. I love the mystery of this Aiden guy. You better believe I'm going to read! Yes, this should be a fabulous story. Good luck!
Until next time...
Starleene Out!
hey
, I like this idea a lot. i wish i could come up with these kind of stories. i agree with
Libra Loo. it is a coming of age story and i can't wait to read it. pm when you post your
next chapter. also kiersten is a nice name.
lil-mizzkitty
This sounds really awesome
Aiden seems like an interesting character and I like Kiersten too. This is like those coming-of-age stories I like so much. Could you PM me once you've written more chapters?
Hmm, how you created a mystery about Aiden makes me want to read, I will give you that. I say just try it! and post it, and I will go from there. The story seems different from others, but alike at the same time. Haha, does that make sense?
~Classy