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Re: Take A Chance- 12
Hi First can I just say that i'm really happy you posted a new chapter. This story is wicked! A lot didn't really happen in this chapter but I liked ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Heartbreak
*NOTE: I went back and sorted this out Hey Haylie I really liked this piece but there are just a few things I think you could improve on for.For instance ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Converse, Paper Airplanes & Dancing in the Rain (Chapter 2)
Hi i read your first chapter ages ago just never reviewed it... Basically i really like this story and i think it had got great potential. I love the plot ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
LOL That has to be the funniest thing i've read. I really thought it was going to be a love poem and was getting ready for some sad ending then ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One part one and two
Hey kitty here, Basically i think everyone has covered most of your problems. But there was one thing i would like to say. I think you are going way too ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (Part two)
Hi theotherone, I just wrote down a really long review and then it all went. :C But nevertheless here i am. Basically out of all the chapters this one has ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)
Well I think imaginemymind covered all your grammar mistakes. I really liked this chapter it was really sad and interesting. I can't wait for part 2.I love this story so ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror
I have not read any of your other reviews but i think most grammer is covered. I liked this poem, i know that most people have that feeling where one ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 5
Hey I quite like your story but slow down! i mean i'm just getting to know your characters an then BAM werewolves. Also he's a shape-shifter not a werewolf (sorry ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Broken: Chapter One
Hey thegirlwholived, I’m not good at grammar so I’ll tell you what I think. This is more of a prologue than a chapter. Because chapters tend to be longer and ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.8
Yay I’m the first one to review. My heart practically skipped a beat when I saw chapter 8!! Oh god you left my heart bleeding for Anita. Poor girl and ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Pianissimo [2]
Hey, Thanks for your email! This chapter pretty much explained all the blanks in the last. I loved the letter it really does seem like it. And that part where ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Pianissimo [1]
Hey, I really like this story. It was so sweet and then I began worrying when the wife noticed that Raymond had been crying. And I felt so sad when ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [4]
HI, I’ve read your past chapters and I have to admit I love it. It’s so girl power :elephant: . And I’m a big fan. But I think classy was ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (15)
hey , still leaving us all wondering i see... I'd call you evil but this all in the spirit of writing even if am left a bit puzzled. i liked ...
Nov 6, 2009