leslieloo

Good play! I would actually like to see how it would all be acted out. The story pulled me in quickly. Just curious. Does the average Joe have a multiple ...

Hello! This is Leslie Loo reviewing your story! First off, I would like to say that I love this piece. It hits the reader with humor and touching moments. I ...

Hi, my name is Leslie Loo and I am here to review your story for Review Day! This is a very creative piece that you have written! Awesome work! Although, ...

Hi! Leslie Loo here to review your work for Review Day! First off, I would like to say that this piece of work is fantastic! I loved Nick's personality and ...

I thought the story was very interesting, although, I did not read it all the way because it was a bit too lengthy for me, but don't take it personally. ...

I'm gonna be honest. I'm not a huge fan of sci-fi, but this is a good story. It's very creative. Okay, I'll start off by saying that the first paragraph ...

This is a good, but sad story. But, to be honest, I don't really when stories involve committing suicide, especially if the main character is doing it. I think that ...

Hi! This is Leslie and I am reviewing your work for Review Day! :) First off, you should capitalize the first word in every sentence. Be a little more detailed. ...

Hi! I'll just start off saying I'm not a big fan of poetry. But, I like the message to this poem. I love the way that it is Christian-themed. I ...

Hello! Here to review another one of your stories. :) Okay, let's talk about the grammar. There were a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there. Here's an example:". ...

Hello! I am here to review your story. Just to let you know, I will be very honest, but please do not let my opinions discourage you from writing stories. ...