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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dancing, Dancing, Dancing

    I really like this and I think that you put a beaches magic into clever words. It is exactly how I would feel if I was dancing at the beach, ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the Writer

    I like this poem and I can relate to this in some sense. I really like the stanzas and the way you collected the words and put them together in ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Innocent Childhood...

    I like this poem , and I can't give you a harsh review because I not good at those. I only can say that you should dig a little deeper ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Never Look Back

    I really like the last part. You are really talented, as I am sure you know, and I think that poetry is really your, how do you say, genre. Keep ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Blinded

    I can't really figure it out but I loved it. These are the best sorts of poems. Descriptive, with a touch of dramatic poetry. Very good, I like it. I ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Where is God?

    I like this, are you saying how can we just sit here and watch this and be the children of God. Because I think that too. I like this poem ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tea Time

    I loved this poem but what is it about? Don't get me wrong I usually understand poetry, but this was sort of hard to grasp. I liked the descriptions and ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Lesson in Dying

    This poem strikes me as really sad and depressing. To me. I don't usually review these types of poems, but this one is good. Because it is descriptive and I ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Don't get me started on...Pop.

    Oh my gosh, I never actually thought of pop music like that. The songwriting part yes, because I want to be a songwriter. But, this really gives you a totally ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Empty Mind

    I love this poem. My favorite parts are when you said " Ample thoughts are now just steam" And when you also wrote" Not a lonesome world escapes this shallow ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Breaking

    I like the part when you wrote your lies don't shape my world. I am going to press the like button on this and for this being your first post, ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Maybe I Write

    I really like this poem and I am going to press the like button. I like the words that you placed in the stanzas and the way you wrote them. ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I'll Buy My Own Roses

    I like the way she stormed in and then said what she said, I can't say it or type it. I really liked the beginning of it when you said ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Grammatical Error?

    I really like this poem, I really love the part when you said I Be Me. It was a daring letter of independence. I really liked it, I think that ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When Nothing Else Matters

    I love this poem and I like the part you wrote about opening your eyes to worlds that have been blind, I think. But, yeah I really liked this poem ...

    Mar 15, 2011


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