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yes, your poem brought out the point!! i loved reading it and I am loving reviewing it. It was magnificent and the rhymes were beautifully put. Though the first stanza ...

This poem is awesome, not corny at all. It puts in words the exact feelings I have for my mother. I love her dearly, and this poem is a great ...

this poem is so amazing. the imagery and the way its written. I love the last two stanzas, though, those were full of good imagery, like the other two, but ...

One word, one thing that came to mind when I first started reading this chapter. I have to go back and read the first. yeah, that. But also mysterious. What ...

This is actually the first chapter I've read of your book. but I have to say, I enjoyed reading it. I wanted to read it again, just to let the ...

I LOVE IT!!! Seriously, I loved this part I don’t want to live like that anymore! I want to live as Christ wants us to! Now is the time to ...

I am not going to cut back on my review just because you are my sister. lol. There was a lot of spelling errors and I'm sure if you read ...

I love your poem, its really good. I can see the emotions in it!!! They won’t even say “bless you,” After I sneeze. < That's my favorite part!!I think it ...

I love this, its awesome!!!! You are an incredibly talented writer. My favorite part is this one: An awakening: It appears as if you've found Yourself in the eyes of ...

I loved reading this, from the imagery, to the way you arranged the words. The way you wrote this really drew me in, and your choice of topic and the ...

This is so true, I am a daydreamer, and an afternoon dreamer, and even a late late late at night dreamer. I love your article, its well written and very, ...

Wow, umm, this is the best poem that I have read of yours. So much depth and meaning. I love it because, once you explained what it meant to you, ...

I love the imagery, that's the best part. But some of the rhymes could have been a little better. like, some of them seemed obvious. For instance sun, done, and ...

Everything that I noticed has already been explained by the persons above me. But I can just say how good this was. perfect imagery and word choice, in my opinion. ...

this was a lovely read, I look forward to reading more of the chapters. but I suggest making paragraphs. it was hard to keep up with where I was reading. ...