Published May 19, 2011
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whoops that wasnt supposed to be one giant mass of writing...ill make sure to seperate it next time. Thanks so much for the feedback
this was a lovely read, I look forward to reading more of the chapters. but I suggest making paragraphs. it was hard to keep up with where I was reading. I loved it all in all, and it literally brought tears to my eyes. Such a lovely story. Sad, and romantic.