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Re: Where were you on 9/11?
I can totally relate to this, really. I was very small when this happened, and my mom was taking me to school. I don't think I even realized what it ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: False Impressions Hurt
Good job!! I really liked the way you made the whole thing a acronym. So, I just really want to say that this is the kind of poem that I ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: The Lion
I don't like your poem, I loves it!! Really you have a GREAT sense of imagery!! There is really nothing bad that I can say about this poem, you must ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: soliloquy
I absolutely loved reading your poem!! It made me think, about the things I do and say everyday that can have a bigger impact on someones tommorow!! Honestly, I loved ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: The sun can be cruel
This poem makes you think, you know!! The best kind of poems are these, really!! You did an amazing job writing your poem!!! The sun can be cruel As it ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Hang On Tight
Wow, just, wow!! This poem was a good follow up to the other poem I read of your, Patterns and Colors!! And let me just say again, you writing is ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Patterns And Colors
I loved reading your poem, it's beautiful and very poetic!! Butterfly, flutter by, Wings flapping against the wind, Softy and yet so delicate, Patterns and Colors, Patterns and Colors. I ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: The 'Real' Reason for 4-H
HAhahah, your poem made me laugh in some parts, and it also made me realize the perks of being in a club or a team!! your poem is very light ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: No More
This piece is very beautiful and very good!! I loved reading it, because it was so full of passion and this is my absolute favorite part of your poem!! Here ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Things I'm Afraid Of
Your poem is very sad, but true. I'm afraid I'll be too weak to stand up and let my voice be heard, even though every second I don't part of ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Not Forever
Good job!! I loved reading this, it may be simple but it makes you think!! I loved this part!! I won't love you forever. I'd rather love you today, praying ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Has Ben, Never Was Chapter 8
Wow, this is very sad, but also very romantic. And creepy, I just don't know where to place Ben. Is he nice? Or mean? Or a creepy man-stalker? It's weird, ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Checkmate, Baby
The lyrics were true, and I found your chorus to be a little weak as you mentioned beforehand. But I really loved it, nonetheless, you did a very good job. ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Stormy Somedays
this poem is epic!! Seriously the imagery was so spot on for the mood you set with the stanzas!! And plus I read this poem seems to be made for ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Forevermore.
This poem is captures your message, really. Good job!! the imagery wasn't bad, either!! My favorite part is When no stars are visible and nothing shines, like my eyes. Barren ...
Aug 10, 2011
