legolas1122

thank you i will improve on it !:)

thank you i will improve on it !:)

Hi everyone if you have time review it ! thank you ! legolas1122

wow ! :)

hi it's legolas and wow no mistakes and it was pretty nice !really and i enjoyed the story i like short story's and it was nice i liked how you ...

hi theescaper020 its legolas1122 and i'm here to review you story ! so there are 2 mistakes and they are dream , about to dream about and the last one ...

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well some mistakes keep up the good work !

keep writing the book!(%u52A0%u7531%uFF01%uFF09

wow it was nice well it was like a poem but it was nice and good it made me a little sleepy but good job i liked the part were ...