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Re: Why Do You Have To Be Popular?
from what I can tell you used good grammar, and I didn't see any spelling mistakes. beginning of your story didn't draw me in. A lot more details its hard ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Love is Endless
first off I want to say I like the idea you have. Now that you have edited it flows a lot better. you need to go back over this because ...
Feb 22, 2013 -
Re: The Doctor's final speech.
i think you should make whats going on a little more clear, you need to give a lot more details
Feb 12, 2012 -
Re: Dear So Called Dad
thank you all so much for the reviws. This was based off a true story just not mine. I am so glad you all liked it i am working on ...
Dec 28, 2011 -
Re: Danny
You have a great idea for this story. I think you should try to add a little more detail like what Danny died of, maybe a little more about the ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: I'll always be that little girl. (Oh, it'll never change)
This is awesome i know your mom will love it
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Confusion
All i can say is wow. I love how you worded everything you are a really good writer you should keep writing poems.
Dec 5, 2011