laurawillrock

It was a good poem about a guy that lost his love and went to "a new world". It was really sad though. I especially liked how you described the ...

THe poems was well put together and gave out feeling. I feel like you did a good job and if the grammar was better it would be perfect.

A very good description of yourself in poetic form. the poem was great but you could used more words than "look at me". Keep on writing i especially liked it.

I i was hooked on it from the beginning. That was an interesting type of story. I am looking forward to seeing more.

It was good it could be a little more descriptive but i liked it. I liked the grammar and i could relate to it.

Lovely. It was a good story and a poem. There isnt much to correct it was well put.

I liked how it was put together. It gave me a good sense of the ocean. However it needed better description. Other than that it sounded good.

It was more than a good peice of work it was beautiful. You had put it together great with repitition, imagery, and irony. If your grammar was a little better ...

It was really interesting. It kept me here. What you have to do is brush up on your grammar though.

I have been experiencing writers block lately too. I dont know why.

It was great. You did a good job with imagery and i really felt the pain. You put together a good peice of work and i mean that in a ...