laughurheartoutbaby

Hey there! I honestly don't read that many poems, but this one was very impressive. I feel like there was some word choice that could have been changed. For example: ...

Woah, that is the most interesting take on this world I have ever seen. In such a dark world, with such twisted beliefs, this poem truly captures something almost impossible ...

Oh my goodness, so dark, but so good! Haha. Very short, but I'm surprised how much you can put in just this little. Death and tragedy and even a melancholy ...

This was truly a beautiful poem, a diamond in the ruff, something completely unexpected. When I first began the poem, I thought, oh great, this is going to be a ...

laughurheartoutbaby is here for a review! This was an excellent piece of writing, extremely spectacular. I love the you voice, calm and smooth and flowing, much like a voice over. ...

Wow. One word. Wow. Wow beyond belief. Honey, before I say anything, we're here. We are always here. And thank you so much for letting us know you need us. ...

I think this was an ingenious way to convey the message that you don't want to be forgotten when you die. That you want your passion to live on in ...

OMIGOSH! SO SAD! But good too! It was just a bit choppy, but other than that, love, it was per-fect!!!!!!!! I loved the touch about Nova being deaf. It was ...

I really enjoyed this story. It seemed a mix of Lord of the Rings and Narnia, even if that wasn't what you were going for. The ancient viking vibe is ...

Hi! So, this is actually an amazing take on Frozen. I really enjoyed it. The only thing was, Elsa changed emotions very quickly. If you just transitioned a bit slower, ...

Being a Potterhead myself, I think this was ingenious. I loved how you revisited the part about Mr. and Mrs. Granger losing their memories. The only piece of critique I ...