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Hey there, I really liked this poem, been reading a few and this is my top fav right now! Good job! The length of the poem was good, the imagery ...

Hi asweeney1919, not to shabby of a poem, i gotta say, it has some very sad meaning with it. Not to criticize but i recommend on capping at the start ...

Hi there GummyBearEater, I quite enjoyed your poem, gets very deep into the essence, of time. "Endings will not make it end,Death would never make it bend, Unhappy thoughts would ...

A very good poem indeed! my favorite part of the poem was "Inside I feel danger and my eyes want to cry Because of a stranger" even though you write ...

Hi there, The poem was sad, but brought a upon detail, of the experience you are having, making it a good poem to express your feeling out. "Lying in the ...

Hi there, i quite enjoyed this poem, with its creativity, its imagery, and the reality of what the enjoyment of a campfire can do to one and another. "Laughter and ...

A very sad poem, but anything that involves reality is sad. Do you see her as she is? A bleeding heart, laughing to hide the pain. That she’s tired of ...