lakegirls

YOU WROTE THIS IN FIVE MINUTES?!?!?! OMG! This was so good! I found it very intriguing and it was easy to follow. Your writing flows; not even some published works ...

This was achingly beautiful. I love your description so much! Honestly I would give you a review but there isn't much to review and partially because I don't believe in ...

I really liked this story a lot! It grabbed my interest right from the beginning and I didn't even break from it until the end. I like the risk you ...

Hey :) I haven't been on here in a while and decided to come and do a nice review for you! First off, I really loved your poem! The emotion ...

I really liked this piece, it was fairly short but it kept my interest the entire time. I didn't notice any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors as I read it, ...

Hey there! So I haven't done a critique in ages, probably close on to 6 months, but here I am, ready to pick it up again! I'm going to copy ...

Hi, I see that you are a new member, so first off welcome to YWS! I hope you will soon love this place as much as I do, but hopefully ...

Hi, I liked this story, even though it made me sad :( I felt for Ally right from the beginning of the story, which is sometimes tricky for people to ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this piece. I see that no one else has commented so I will be the first to tell you that it is extremely well done. I ...

Hi, So to start off, this story is not what I expected, which in my opinion is always good, I love the air of a surprise! Your writing was well ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! First off I don't think this is in the right place, try moving it to fiction, unless you plan on turning it into a story. While ...

Hi, I think this is excellent. Everyone had pretty much covered what I was going to say so I shall shower you with compliments and give you advice. I was ...

Hi, I enjoyed this story, but you have a lot of dialogue going on. Maybe try starting off some sentences with description or something different. It is a tiny bit ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS. First off you should go do two reviews right away. It's sort of a rule, so that everyone gets an equal amount of reviews and all ...

Hi, I'm going to do a review for you today! All my edits, comments and concerns will be in bold :) He could feel the warmth of the sun on ...