ladcat13

Thanks! I find it ironic that my one-morning inspiration was a hit, whereas the works I slave over for weeks barely even make it out of the green room. Very ...

Thanks for the help there! To be honest, I didn't think all that much about this piece. I saw a cool fanart with the words "the God who wanted to ...

Aaahh! I love it! Pure genius!

Thanks for the advice! I'm mostly just trying to get events down in order for now. I'll be doing a lot of stylistic editing later, but when I do go ...

Not a problem, my freind. I see good things in your future ;)

Good to know.

Thanks for the review! Have you read the other chapters? That might help clear up some if your confusion. Mirayah's a girl... ;D

Thanks for the advice! They were all great suggestions, and I think you've really helped me out. I just didn't want to take the word "dusk" out, since I feel ...

Is it about a person who's committed a "crime", was persecuted by a corrupt government, and who was put to death, leaving a widow behind?

Derp. Heehee- It's such a funny word. Derp. *grins creepily, then disappears in a dramatic smoke bomb*

I don't have anything in the green room, but I think I would like some more feedback on my short story . No problem, I've been perusing the Green Room ...

Ooh. I was confused about the streetlights- I was imagining old fashion oil lamps. You might want to be a bit more descriptive of the new place, however, to emphasize ...

Ooh. I was confused about the streetlights- I was imagining old fashion oil lamps. You might want to be a bit more descriptive of the new place, however, to emphasize ...

Well that indicates a change of location, but not a change of time period.

Lolz.