ladcat13

Hehe. This is the last work in the Green Room. Don't feel bad, though, it's not because your work is bad! I liked your poem very much! I have nothing ...

This was a very nice piece, FatCowSis! I liked it very much. The plot was believable, the feelings of the characters very well-described, and the typos very few : D ...

Wow, Subtle, this piece was haunting! I loved all the description; it was poetic, but not info-dumpy. The plot was short and simple and the prompt is one that, of ...

I really like this piece, Aley! You did a great job of portraying this kind of relationship without being overly positive or overly negative about it. Well done! There's a ...

This was a great first chapter, AEChronicle! I liked your story. You did a good job describing the setting and the characters with a nice gradual exposition, without any unceremonious ...

Wow! Wow, wow, wow, wow, WOW! I loved this! I can't even start to tell you how much I liked this! You did a wonderful job on (almost) everything! I ...

Wow, Griff, this is great! You did a wonderful job developing your characters. Though there were only two, it was perfectly balanced; a lot of information about the characters, all ...

For something that popped into your brain while trying to work, I like this very much. It's very poetic and conveys the meaning in such a small word count. While ...

Jeez, for a "New Member" you're a lot more active than I am, and I've been here for a whole year! Good to see someone taking soooo much interest in ...

This was beautiful and powerful, and nearly flawless! I love that your poem's rhyme and rhythm schemes were perfectly consistent. It is a truthful poem that many people can relate ...

I liked the general descriptions here, but the beginning is something I've heard before a billion times. The life of a high schooler. The socially awkward main character. The crush. ...

YOUR. POEM. IS BEAUTIFUL. I... I don't know what to say, I... I've never even READ such perfect poetry on this website before. I've always been able to find SOME ...

What a cute little poem! I liked it. The rhyme scheme and rhythm were a bit inconsistent, but it was well-worded and the topic was funny. There's no grammatical mistakes ...

This work was very nicely descriptive, if the format was a bit weird. Just watch out for things like this: -"fear--striking" should be " fear, striking" -"what-so-ever" should be "whatsoever" ...

Wow, that was very deep. For something you allegedly wrote while in a fever it was very good. I was haunted the whole time I was reading it, even before ...