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Re: Too Many of Us
BOOM *appears in a dramatic smoke bomb* I am here... to review. I certainly agree with you, or at least with the message you're trying to convey. I only have ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: His Legacy - Prologue
BOOM *appears in a dramatic smoke bomb* I am here... to review. This is a great beginning. I don't exactly know what it's going to be... that is not clear ...
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: We Missed Each Other
BOOM *appears in a dramatic smokebomb* I am here to review! I'm gonna earn those pancakes... There were a few small things wrong with your poem, and being the OCD ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: Sirens
Welcome to YWS! I hope you love it here, I know I do. I want to say that I like your story, but there are some things wrong with it ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Emotions and Irony
Woo! *Shivers* That was gruesome. What a wonderful horror! I just have to say that the transition from one point of view to another was very unclear. Also, the reader ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 7 (Revised)
Hello! Ladcat here for a review. Now I gotta say, I've been following your story for some time now and I think it's superb. You have excellent word choice, you ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Great Journey
*Drops from the sky* Boo! Guess who- Here to review! Yeah, you've seen that one before. Guess I gotta come up with a new, better one. Anyway, great job with ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Faithful Journey...
*Drops from sky* Boo. Guess who. I'm here to review! Hehe, see what I did there. So anyway, I want to say that I liked your story very much. It ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Cry For Help
Hey, don't wallow in self-pity. That's not a great way to cry for help. Look at the bright sides of things. You're funny as heck! I've reviewed several things of ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Things You Never Should Have Said
*Drops from sky* Boo. Guess who, here for a review! (See what I did there? See what I did? I'm clever, hehe.) So anyway, besides me being delusional, what's up. ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Moon or Whatever
*Drops out of the sky* Boo! Guess who, here for review! (See what I did there, see that?) So anyway, I very much liked the emotions expressed in this poem, ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Thirsty
Guess who... yeah, it's me! Boo. I'm always fond of satire, and strange satire is best! (See what I did there? yeah. *Derpy face*) Anyway, I'm of a similar opinion ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: I am not a toy
Guess who... yeah, it's me. Boo. I loved this poem! I'm just wondering... The first line of every stanza says "'I am not a toy,' I said", but then the ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: A Time Traveling Teen- (A.T.T.T) Chapter 1: That Night
Ladcat here for a review! I think you have a great story! I want to see how it turns out, very much. However, you had a lot of issues in ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part VII
This one was a lot more graphic than the other ones... in short, the little dark corner of my soul that I don't dare let anyone else see likes this ...
Feb 23, 2014