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Re: The First Crush
hey ! First of all applauds for you to choose this topic. The title caught my attention. I first actually thought it's a girl who's speaking it and i thought ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: I love you
Hey Amnesia! I am Kriti. Starting with the title, it was very catchy which, candidly speaking, compelled me to read it...Well the story is too short, but that would have ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: A true gentleman becomes a thief!
Nice story, though there are numerous ways in which it could have been much better. Firstly, the title is somewhat inept and could have been better..! Secondly, the language is ...
May 7, 2016 -
Re: I'm Sorry
Personally, I liked this piece of work very much, since I could relate things in my life to it.. More than words, the feelings which it subsumes which makes this ...
May 7, 2016 -
Re: Discontented in Spring
Firstly, the title itself is very catchy. The starting line of the poetry could have been more vivid.The language is easy to comprehend. Also the flow of the poetry is ...
May 7, 2016
