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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: This Meadow

    Yikes but wow. This poem is as deep as it is dark. I love the imagery for each line and your ability to tie a story, of why the meadow ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Haikus of The Periodic Table of Elements

    I enjoyed these poems with glee. I love chemistry and it made me and my friends (who were reading over my shoulder) laugh. Hydrogen goes boom. Hehe...and so does uranium. ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wind

    I love the imagery for this poem. You give the wind life in a way that many have tried and failed to do. When I read this poem I could ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Alpha Day Chapter One

    I like his idea. The idea that angels are people who have their own society but they have to keep it "hidden" from the people of the world. I would ...

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hunter..Or Hunted? (part of chapter one)

    I did like the idea of the story however...I feel that the story needs more description and more emotion. When I was six, my mother was killed by these horrible ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Three Troops - Chapter 1: Surprise!

    This was very intersting to me. A few family members of mine have discribed war in this way. I think that the desciption was all but perfect and I felt ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Caleb's story, chapter one

    I do enjoy this story. I especially like the fact that you have given it a slight spin off to the events that took place during the Cold War. It ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: When The Moon is Bigger Than The Sun

    This poem is not only really good...it's really beautiful. The imagery is fantastic and I think that placing the picture before the poem not only enhances it but lets your ...

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    It would have to be hands down... The Stand By: Stephen King. I know that loads o college students have read it and loved it but the first part of ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Snow Flakes

    This is so cute. The rhyming scheme is really nice and I enjoy it. I especially enjoyed how you compared snow to sand. I would have never put those two ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: FANG: A Maximum Ride Novel

    I love this series. James Patterson is a god when it comes to making the Maximum Ride books. This book was much better than the fifth book in the Maximum ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: CHERUB, The series by Tobert Muchamore

    I read the first and the second book of this series ("The Recruit" and "The Dealer") and I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the series so far. There ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Job of the Writer

    I enjoyed this poem because you touch on everything that it is to be a writer. I totally agree with you. On the other side of things, I didn't quite ...

    Dec 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mannequin Love

    The metaphor for this poem is not only true but it is very vivid. This poem hits home for a lot of people including myself. We all have been in ...

    Dec 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Lion Without His Roar.

    When you look at the metaphorical meaning of this poem it hits you deep down in your soul and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I especially enjoy the fact that you ...

    Dec 6, 2010


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