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Re: This Meadow
Yikes but wow. This poem is as deep as it is dark. I love the imagery for each line and your ability to tie a story, of why the meadow ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Haikus of The Periodic Table of Elements
I enjoyed these poems with glee. I love chemistry and it made me and my friends (who were reading over my shoulder) laugh. Hydrogen goes boom. Hehe...and so does uranium. ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Wind
I love the imagery for this poem. You give the wind life in a way that many have tried and failed to do. When I read this poem I could ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Alpha Day Chapter One
I like his idea. The idea that angels are people who have their own society but they have to keep it "hidden" from the people of the world. I would ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Hunter..Or Hunted? (part of chapter one)
I did like the idea of the story however...I feel that the story needs more description and more emotion. When I was six, my mother was killed by these horrible ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Three Troops - Chapter 1: Surprise!
This was very intersting to me. A few family members of mine have discribed war in this way. I think that the desciption was all but perfect and I felt ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Caleb's story, chapter one
I do enjoy this story. I especially like the fact that you have given it a slight spin off to the events that took place during the Cold War. It ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: When The Moon is Bigger Than The Sun
This poem is not only really good...it's really beautiful. The imagery is fantastic and I think that placing the picture before the poem not only enhances it but lets your ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
It would have to be hands down... The Stand By: Stephen King. I know that loads o college students have read it and loved it but the first part of ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Snow Flakes
This is so cute. The rhyming scheme is really nice and I enjoy it. I especially enjoyed how you compared snow to sand. I would have never put those two ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: FANG: A Maximum Ride Novel
I love this series. James Patterson is a god when it comes to making the Maximum Ride books. This book was much better than the fifth book in the Maximum ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: CHERUB, The series by Tobert Muchamore
I read the first and the second book of this series ("The Recruit" and "The Dealer") and I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the series so far. There ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: The Job of the Writer
I enjoyed this poem because you touch on everything that it is to be a writer. I totally agree with you. On the other side of things, I didn't quite ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Mannequin Love
The metaphor for this poem is not only true but it is very vivid. This poem hits home for a lot of people including myself. We all have been in ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: A Lion Without His Roar.
When you look at the metaphorical meaning of this poem it hits you deep down in your soul and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I especially enjoy the fact that you ...
Dec 6, 2010
