kogarasumaro143

How touching the poem of yours can be. *teary eyes* You achieve the level wherein you touch some hearts of your readers. Again, as what I also tell to others, ...

*ouch* really people see suicide as an immediate solution to their problems. Nice! You really portray what is happening now. Positive Review: The flow of the poem is nice. I ...

Suggestion: Why not also write a short story version of this poem. It seems it can create a very good short story (and tell me if you make one). Reviews: ...

I agree... This is not a poem... It can be a narrative short story.. Hey devinj, Your second post which says this is two years old and you don't talk ...

This type of writing is very common. Still, its nice. It shows the cries of the long lost souls who can't find their way to paradise. Positive Review: Wonderful! Probably, ...

Fantastic. You really show to us the reality of how love feels when it is not time for you to love. Definitely, if you are not destined to that person, ...

Positive Review: I like your attitude while writing the poem. It shows the weakest side of you and you are not ashamed to share it to everyone. Nice. Negative Review: ...

Another drink, Words spew out. Another smile to hide what's screaming to get out. Another free throw, and the walls come tumbling down. Another laugh to cover up the terrifying ...

Hey! What's up. I already read numerous poems about angel but this is my first time to read an angel being pictured out as a creature where one can lean ...

Excellent description of a Griffin. You made it as a symbol of bravery, intelligence, positive output in life, and sense of responsibility. Those qualities that we people should also possess. ...

Nice one. I love this poem. Suggestion: You can change this line Eyes see me, to Eyes are watching. Maybe you wanted to emphasize that people are watching you. :| ...

Great write! :D You're painting a picture of the world where PEACE rules. Nice perspective as a writer. Also, in the last line especially this part, "Who would I be ...