Positive Review: I like your attitude while writing the poem. It shows the weakest side of you and you are not ashamed to share it to everyone. Nice.
Negative Review: Although I like it, still, you should fill the big space for improvement. You are dealing with the readers feelings so you should put some more words to touch and to let us feel what you are feeling. IMPROVE! Keep on writing.
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EverTheGentleman wrote:“No longer!” I shouted, I screamed out I flung objects from #FF0000 ">here and there, and like a tornado, ripped across my room I turned around
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