kman134

Hey guys, this is Kman134. I hope you like the second chapter. it's hard to do urban fantasy and come up with explanations on how this and that could exist ...

Since this is the first chapter, the universe building has just begun. While the story will have light novel aesthetics, there is some realistic ideas i'm abut to add to ...

Also, the part with "I just didn't want to see a cute girl get hurt". i wasn't really thinking when i put that there.

For the brackets; that's suppose to be a joke on RPG games where you click on a spell with simple names like [Recovery] or [wrath], it always appears like that.

Now that i look back at it, I can see the ending seemed rushed and making little sense. I need to add more details on Jake's response to Kenia's explanation ...

Overwriting has been a habit of mind. sorry if it gets on your nerves.

Also, i removed the part about Keya being the elf princess and replaced it with her saying, "I'm just a normal elf mage girl who happens to be on a ...

Yeah, i have a thing for making the first chapter start off like a stereotypical shone manga, but after a few chapters they become more real.

yeah, in chapter 3, it shows that Ashura is not really a game but an actual world.

Also, thanks for pointing out the nightgown and roommate part, i almost overlooked that. I meant to say that the way Keya was nervously talking and how sexy her nightgown ...

if you've seen harem anime like Familiar of Zero, Rosario Vampire, High School DXD, Infinite Stratos, etc. then you would know my stories would be like that and i don't ...

already did. the only difference of the boxes it that one has silver laces while the right one has gold.

dude. i have read a lot of fantasy novels. i have read Shannara, Lord of the Rings, and Conan the Barbarian. i have watched Fullmetal Alchemist (both the original and ...

If you're wondering why the vizier is so contempt with the oracle, it is because the oracle is a part of the Sisterhood while the vizier is a member of ...

sometimes, the boxes tend to look the same and have the same symbol on them. so, they would have them mixed up.