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Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 11
yeah, the wolves are suppose to be like the council's guard dogs who patrol the city. they were trained to tear the flesh out of any stranger that isn't one ...
May 17, 2017 -
Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 2
what are the stereotypes in the chapter?
May 4, 2017 -
Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 10
in Ashura, Halflings are both similar and different from the ones in Lord of the Rings. they are tower that dwarves and shorter than humans standing about 5'2 in height. ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: Nazo Gakkou - Chapter 1
he's very observant, but isn't interest in anything other than history, books, anime, and comics. he has asperger's
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 9
yeah, the unnecessary information is a habit of mine, which i'm trying to cure.
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 9
Grimhilda and Keya are suppose to be polar opposites. while Keya acts refined and girlish as a reflection of her regal status, Grimhilda is suppose to be tough and tomboyish. ...
Apr 17, 2017 -
Re: Ashura: A World of Sword and Magic Chapter 8
before posting chapter eight, i accidentally erased it and had to rewrite the whole thing. so, it was hard to recall what i wrote before.
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: Nazo Gakkou - Chapter 1
yeah, i wanted Mr. Kafka to be pegged as neurotic in a sense he would have certain idiosyncratic habits such as the gloves, or the reason he wears gloves was ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Nazo Gakkou - Chapter 1
sorry. i was in a hurry when i wrote this.
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: Life is Strange Chapter 4
Mina is so sensitive about her breasts, she would absent-mindedly lash out at someone mentioning large breasts without even thinking about it.
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Life is Strange Chapter 1
the reason why Mishima never figured out mina was a superhero was suppose to give the Lois Lane cliche where no matter how intelligent reporters and love interests are, they ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Life is Strange Prologue
mishima's actually a boy but because it's hard to put the protagonists' gender pronouns in first person, people got confused of him being a girl. there's a running gag in ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Life is Strange Chapter 4
true. can't blame me for trying, though.
Mar 23, 2017 -
Re: Life is Strange Chapter 4
On the other hand, i was able to fix some of the errors in the chapter that you pointed out. for the record, i was trying to give this story ...
Mar 23, 2017 -
Re: Life is Strange Chapter 4
Sorry. This chapter was a bit of a rush job. I was kind of having writer's block when I wrote this.
Mar 23, 2017
