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I agree with threm.

I agree with what thedelphinater says, and shes right, it is great, I liked it

I agree with Galerius, I think if you followed his advice, this poem of yours could really be something. welldone for giving it a go!

I like the idea of flying in your dreams, I have always wanted to fly like a bird with wings of feathers high where noone can reach.This piece is really ...

wow, that was an intersting piece, i think you have lots of potential and ialso think that your writing is AMAZING

I really liked this piece, it was really beautiful. you are a brilliant writer. that piece was really amazing and wonderful. goodluck for the future!!!!!

That was a really beautiful piece. You are an amazing writer.

I really liked it. that is an amazing piece of work. welldone! you rock!