klennon14

Thank you so much for the review! Your advice is very helpful.

Thank you very much for your thoughtful review!

Hi, thank you for the comment! I felt like it would abruptly stop the flow in some stanzas if I added in too many periods or punctuation marks. I almost ...

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Hi there! Thanks so much for the thoughtful review. My intentions were to keep this poem vague and leave a sense of mystery or longing for the reader, but perhaps ...

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Thank you so much for the thoughtful review! All of your tips are very helpful and I will have to revise this poem.

Thank you! The last line means I need a light for a cigarette after writing this poem haha! But I included in the description, in no way shape or form ...

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate the review! Just to clarify, I wasn't telling writers to be sad or anything, just not to let others tear them down for ...

Hi there! Thank you kindly for the review. I'm not really sure why I'm getting flack for this being a depressing poem. There are tons of poems on this sight ...

With all do respect, you are not a part of family nor do you live with them so I don't think it is fair for you to make assumptions about ...

Thank you so much for the kind words!