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Wait. :shock: You didn't tell me this was a song. I'm not that great at critiquing these so I'm sorry if this isn't that helpful. First off, this had a ...

Okay, I read the first one, but decided against reviewing it. Sorry! I really should've. :) Anyway, this--like the first--was really good. Nuf said, right? I don't have much to ...

Ooh... That was interesting. I like how it was all wrote in either texts, e-mails, or notes. I got a little confused at first when they were passing notes, but ...

First of all, welcome to YWS. :D Second of all... I have no idea why you aren't already a published poet by now! This is one of the most shortest, ...

FIRST OF ALL! Welcome to YWS. :D Now, back to the review... Plot This sounds like it could be really good, but I do think it needs some improvement. Truthfully, ...

Ooh... This is an interesting beginning. ^^ I like how you're using the story of Jack the Ripper as the Grim Reaper. Not that I've actually heard the story, but ...

Hi Volant! :D Oooh... this one seemed sort of deep. :wink: But the problem with that is, is that this is with Sage and Blaine . Blaine is not like ...

Sorry I took so long to get around to reading this Volant! But I'm here and I must say, I really do like this series of scripts. ^_^ I should’ve ...

I just got the book from my friend, she said she absolutely LOVED it and that she wanted another book to tell the life of Renesmee *shudders at name.* I, ...

:shock: *stares at screen* Wow. Is there really anymore to say about this? It was... was... Wow. You know what? I think this should be put in the song forum ...

Looks like you got everything I asked for. ^_^ A little more about Mute's eyes and more about what Prate is doing. Still, there wasn't any grammar errors that I ...

I'm sorry that this will be a short crit and not very helpful. :) Anyway... I really liked it. ^_^ About the age, I wasn't so sure if I really ...

*stares at screen for a moment* I-I don't know what to say. Usually I don't wander around the Romantic Fiction forum and if I do, I rarely bother to critique, ...

Awe... Still, that was very , no, wait, incredibly well wrote. It was just as good as it was the last time I read, and I'm glad I did read ...

First off, welcome to YWS fun4eva. ^_^ ...Okay, back to the critique. The grammer in the begging was well... sort of awful. There were many places that need capitalaztion. At ...