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  • My Princess

    Unborn yet O' daughter of firs,Open thy eyes to the light,Thus born O' daughter of tears,I shalt train to be thy knight.Sleep so O' princess of dreams,listen to the hum ...

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  • Kent - JPU "The Lunestra Case"

    **********************************************************************************Chapter 1 "The Sudden Memory"********************************************************************************** The do

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  • Loves Final Kiss

    I wrote this poem a few years back, though I'm not sure if this is fine. A review would be very helpful. Thank you!_______________________________________________Suddenly my days of fun ended,with you

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  • Still beats for you

    Hi! This was a poem requested by a friend of mine, I'm not sure if it's good... a review would be highly appreciated... I had to rush it due to ...

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  • Our Parting

    I kinda wrote this poem a few weeks back, I know this isn't good so a review would be greatly appreciated thank you! "Our Parting"By: Kite_____________________________We were once strangers,Sought to ...

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  • You will be remembered

    I wrote this yesterday, uhm a review would be appreciated THANK YOU "You will be remembered"____________________________By: Kite*on editing*

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  • Your Photograph

    ... Hope you guys like it... Please help me improveYour Photographby: KiteLooking into the camera's sight,Aiming upon the target's smile,A click, followed by that warming light,An eternal memory withi

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  • My Goodbye to the year 2010

    I hope you guys like it I'm still kind of learning here, so comments could help. THANK YOU VERY MUCH ___________________________________________________________________________'twas finally here,that

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  • Knightingale

    Sorry, I had to make this within 5 hours. Helpful comments could be great :D THANK YOU VERY MUCH! Autumn's afternoon in Shires valley where the trees have turned to ...

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  • My Forever Dream

    My Forever Dream Sidus Levis - Kite I'd go to sleep every single day, And I'd begin to dream every single night, Hoping within that dream I might, Begin ...

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No great thing is created suddenly. There must be time. Give your best and always be kind.
— Epictetus