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  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Roommates

    Hello This story has a lot of potential with the setting as being a mental hospital however the story doesn't quite seem to deliver. There is definitely a possibility that ...

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: a king returns

    hello king of eli! I'm not entirely sure why you chose the word "cage" in your opening line? If there's a point I'm missing then that might be on me, ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: to be a boy, raised as a girl

    Hey kingofeli! I really like the concept and the idea behind this poem. My absolute favorite part is the closing stanza [block] my name is ricky. i am a boy, ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Top Five Things More Disgusting Than Pooping on an Onion

    Hello Well first of all, how did you even come up with this? This is actually a very adorable little story which I could totally imagine to be kids book. ...

    Oct 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: "The name I forgot to ask"

    Hello! Wow your title is very captivating! Excluding the various grammatical errors, the story has a good outline. Although it is very descriptive, the story itself is lost within the ...

    Oct 19, 2015


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly