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Re: Roommates
Hello This story has a lot of potential with the setting as being a mental hospital however the story doesn't quite seem to deliver. There is definitely a possibility that ...
Nov 6, 2015 -
Re: a king returns
hello king of eli! I'm not entirely sure why you chose the word "cage" in your opening line? If there's a point I'm missing then that might be on me, ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: to be a boy, raised as a girl
Hey kingofeli! I really like the concept and the idea behind this poem. My absolute favorite part is the closing stanza [block] my name is ricky. i am a boy, ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Top Five Things More Disgusting Than Pooping on an Onion
Hello Well first of all, how did you even come up with this? This is actually a very adorable little story which I could totally imagine to be kids book. ...
Oct 23, 2015 -
Re: "The name I forgot to ask"
Hello! Wow your title is very captivating! Excluding the various grammatical errors, the story has a good outline. Although it is very descriptive, the story itself is lost within the ...
Oct 19, 2015
