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  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Roommates

    Hello This story has a lot of potential with the setting as being a mental hospital however the story doesn't quite seem to deliver. There is definitely a possibility that ...

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: a king returns

    hello king of eli! I'm not entirely sure why you chose the word "cage" in your opening line? If there's a point I'm missing then that might be on me, ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: to be a boy, raised as a girl

    Hey kingofeli! I really like the concept and the idea behind this poem. My absolute favorite part is the closing stanza [block] my name is ricky. i am a boy, ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Top Five Things More Disgusting Than Pooping on an Onion

    Hello Well first of all, how did you even come up with this? This is actually a very adorable little story which I could totally imagine to be kids book. ...

    Oct 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: "The name I forgot to ask"

    Hello! Wow your title is very captivating! Excluding the various grammatical errors, the story has a good outline. Although it is very descriptive, the story itself is lost within the ...

    Oct 19, 2015


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