kingolions

Hey. This is great. I really like the idea you created. It is like a crime story made into a poem. But I think it works well. I really like ...

Hey. This was really good. I like the idea of the window, and how it fogs. It really painted a picture of what was happening. The one thing that I ...

Umm... Firstly, just want to say that this was not what I was expecting to read. But that was half of why I liked it so much. I thought it ...

Hey. I really liked this. The only thing I am wary of, is that (to me at least) it didn't flow properly. When I read it, I was reading each ...

Hey. I usually start off my reviews by saying, 'I really like this poem.' And once again, that was how I was going to start it. But by saying what ...

Hey. This was an unusual idea, but that is one of the thing that makes it better. I like how it used the image of light and dark. It is ...

Hey. Firstly, (and I know this contradicts your name, but) I really liked this poem. It didn't have a rhyming scheme, but poetry doesn't have to have one. Some times ...

Hey. I like what you have written. It is not like most of what you see written. It is a little short though. But I've done that too. I do ...

Hey. I really liked this. I don't normally read (or write) romance, but I really enjoyed this one. I do have one little thing to pick at though. In the ...

Hey. I like this poem. It isn't like most poems, but that's what makes it good. The only thing I have to pick at, is the second line. 'It carries ...

Hey. I really liked this chapter too. I do want to say though, that you should re-read what you have written, especial with stories, and check your grammar. There are ...

Hey. Just doing the review you asked me to do. I really like this story. It has a great idea to it, and it makes you want to keep reading ...

Hey. This is a great poem. I like how it flowed, and you could picture what you were saying. I especially liked how your rhyming scheme worked. It was rhyming, ...

Hey. I don't know what to say, exept that I loved this story. I thought it was a great idea, and for a first try, it was a lot better ...

Hey. I like the idea for this piece, and I like your motivation for it. The thing I have to pick at, it the way the piece is written. It ...