kingofeli

Well, this is just the prologue, so there will be a lot of unanswered questions ^^ I hope it gets clearer later on.

I have no idea what's going on here but this story is hilarious and it gave me a good laugh, haha! I like it.

Thank you for the review, I appreciate the constructive criticism, it's very kind of you. I'll try to keep all of this in mind, as I can be very vague ...

Thank you very much!

I'm afraid I don't really understand this, it's quite muddled and a bit unclear? I know some poems are meant to be confusing, but this doesn't seem like it should ...

This is interesting. I enjoy how you've worded this, and to me it almost seems like the person is going through a panic attack with the way it is structured. ...