kingofeli

Thanks so much for reading it! There's a lot more I could've done with this poem I realize, and I might just have to go back and edit it. But ...

Thank you for the review! I'll try to keep all of that in mind as I go forward. Honestly this poem was mostly just a vent poem so I wasn't ...

The lack of capitalization is intentional! I like to write some poems in an ee cummings style, where I forgo some capitalization/punctuation to add style to the poem. Thank you ...

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! I didn't even think about my mom, thanks for mentioning that!

My grandpa never actually saw pearl harbor, he was born the year it happened, he just taught me about history. And thanks for your review!

Thank you! I like what you've given me here, you don't have to come back and write more if you don't want to ^^

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it!

I'm sorry but saying abortion is the same as murdering is very hurtful to people who have had abortions due to circumstances beyond their control.

I used "bad dog" because the poem is written by the dog itself. That's also why there's little capitalization and grammar, as it's written by a dog, not a human.

Thank you fox, you're very kind.

Yeah I realize now that the poem isn't so great x.x

Thank you very much, it was written in a moment of upset so I may not have gotten the point across well.

Twelve year old Tamir Rice was killed a few weeks ago by a police officer. His death was ruled a homicide and charges are being brought against the police, but ...

Thank you! All of the punctuation and spelling errors are intentional ^^ I do it to have something of an ee cummings style. Although, I admit, I should've added a ...

Thank you so much!