kimalane21

There's just a few little things that's been runnin' through my mind, and I'm trying not to choke on the lack of evidence I find. And I cannot comprehend how ...

A worried urgency slowly crept across his eyes, causeING the usual electric blue to become more subdued and sullen. cause is not in the right particable. What once might have ...

"The violinists bow ed , poised and ready to begin, and created a dense forest with a small platform at the heart." no need for the apostraphe, and bow does ...

How would you feel if entire cultures began teaching their children that you and anyone who looks like you are evil and wanted nothing but to rip their heart out ...

great job! your poem reminds me of two-face, one of the villians who lives in batman's gotham city. im such a nerd :) but i really like, only one critisism..the ...

omg this is an amazing poem! the title really drew me in and i really like how you start the poem with the old saying "curiosity killed the cat, satisfaction ...

A pair of shady zealous eyes, Chase the soaring of the sun, They still glimmer in their tries, To watch the dawn before its gone. If you're going for rhyming ...

i really like this poem, but something seemed a little off to me. maybe make it a bit longer, or go into more detail about this friend? it ends a ...

We are the ones, you laugh at and scorn. We are the ones, still playing with toys. I really don't like this line it doesn't flow well and seems akward ...

What hurts the most Is what's untrue The thing that's haunting Is me without you. Right now my world is perfect My smile is not pretend But how long 'till ...

i didnt like this much. it was good, but it just doesn't feel complete to me. the first stanza was really confusing, and the second stanza...where did that come from? ...

this is a great poem :) i really like it. i get the sense that you like to do good in school, and you're mad about not getting a good ...