kikialicia31

Hey there, As I climb up that mountain. That stands so tall. I feel so alone. I’m the weakest of all. I am certainly the kind. That no one looks ...

I'm sorry to say this but I think this poem is a bit annoying. Try to read it out loud and you might find it's a little annoying. Anyway write ...

Welcome to YWS! The first thing I think when I start writing this poem, it must be for Michael Jackson right? Anyway it's a good poem and I liked it. ...

Day wrote: I agree with this. foxy wrote: I keep feeling that you have something missing. Your ideas are great but you don't seem to describe them in the best ...

I liked the end of this poem. Here I stand, here Sound a little bit funny. it's better if you remove the here . It will be much better. Anyway, ...

AsxLoversxGo wrote: This reminds me of a Shakespearian Sonnet, "My Mistresses Eyes Are Nothing Like the Sun" I believe. I can't remember the number. I think it's his most romantic ...

You should try to use more imagery; like similes, metaphors and images. You know, that sensory stuff and I just want to ask this, how do you hate yourself? And ...

It's very cute but I catch one or two mistakes in it. Example like this one. "No, Adam. You're not a stranger... YOU ARE MY FAIRY GODMOTHER and you're here ...