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Hello, this is great. It's flows really well. You did a nice job. Write more because I liked writing this. Good luck and keep writing, Alicia.

It kills me to know that there is nothing I can do to this feeling I shall not subdue My heart is in pain and sorrow but the reason I ...

Hey there. Looks like there's not much for me to review since the review part is pretty much covered.I enjoyed reading it. I really like it. Keep writing to improve ...

Hibiscus wrote: You are nothing but a fairytale Is fiction not a crime? A gripping tale of courage, Your lies are like a chime. If you where as noble, As ...

Hello Blossom. (Okay, you really reminds me of my favorite powerpuffgirls! LOL) I agree with everyone. There's some misspelling words like embrace and realize. But other than that, it's a ...

Oh my gosh! I just loved it! I wish I could heard it sung. I found myself singing it even I don't know the notes. I think it's great. I ...

Lumi wrote: I saw this in the new post feed and I had to comment on it. To Write Love on Her Arms is an organization that is very dear ...

I don't have much to say since the reviews part is much covered. Anyway, this is a really good poem and I enjoyed reading it. Continue writing to make it ...

Lumi wrote: This is so cute and succinct! I love it with all of my heart. You know what you're doing here, so there's no call for a nit-pick review, ...

Hello! Well, the reviews is pretty much covered. I just want to say I really enjoyed reading it. The poem is beautiful and paints a lovely picture. It's wonderful and ...

kaiden wrote: Wow nice. Very cool. Definitely a "I'll give all my love to you" kind of poem. Interesting. I like the rhythm and rhyming here. I thought it flowed ...

Hey there, this is a good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I hope that you will post more poems. Good luck and keep writing, Alicia.

rainistheskystears wrote: Oh i love this! The way you dercibe your emotions is great. Also im glad you didnt try to make this rhyme, like alot of people try to ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society. ladypurple wrote: THE UNKNOWN KNOWN WAS KNOWN BY THE UNKNOWN KNOWN . MAYENDE JOEL SIRONDA. Weird tounge twister. I wouldn't recommend CAPS LOCK. It seems ...

Hey there, about your poem, it's a little annoying if you keep on repeating the same words. We used to live inside a fairy tale-- With colors, music, life and ...