kidashka

And I don't care who is right, 'Cause I need both of them. I used to fall asleep at night And listen to their scrap. Snatches of serious adult words ...

Hi there! I thought this was a pretty good start to your novel - the character interaction is very good and natural. Although, I don't really understand what the difference ...

I'm sorry to be so ruthless, but I know that you've asked for help with your English so I went full grammar-nazi mode ... Hope that it helps! If you ...

Aw ... I completely disagree with the above two comments. I don't think there's anything 'wrong' with it at all! I like the feel of it - it seems quite ...

Firstly, I love you for writing this because (as a female who has studied this in great detail!) I am totally in agreemenet with you!!!! Feedback -Very sound reasoning and ...

Hi ladyworkz! I have to say, I don't really have any overwhelming feelings towards this poem. I think it's quite full of emotion, but it doesn't impact so well on ...

I really love the first one; the way it's all broken up makes it really pondering and kind of... like, lazy contemplations of memories. It reads effortlessly and is beautiful. ...

I do like this, though I am still slightly bemused of what the word is (Is it love?) Although you describe it's importance and impact beautifully, I think you could ...

I really like the imagery throughout - it's pretty awesome and gives a good idea (is the photo one of yours aswell? 'Cause I really like it :smt003) However it ...

I liked this; it was quite sweet and contemplative. Only thing that annoyed me was that some of the rhymes are a bit awkward - angel/archangel, for example. Maybe that ...

I agree with ziggie.. whilst it seemed pretty good at the beginning (ignoring some proofing issues), it got really rushed and confusing near the end. I think something like this ...

Wow, this is awesome! I love the imagery throughout, and how you've managed to capture really interesting personalities in so little time! The present tense works really well - it ...

This was hilarious! The iCarly bit was completely accurate... my sister loves to watch it, and I secretly pretend to hate it... >.< It was very funny - even though ...

Wow! This is really awesome! I took me about three reads to actually understand it though O_o The first time I was in a bad mood and kinda wasn't reading ...

It hurts to talk, but I'd sing, sweetness, and I'd whistle for you, as long as you'd wait up to hear my song. ^This is my favourite part; there's so ...