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Hello there! Thanks for requesting another review. A couple of other reviewers have already touched on a few things that I noticed, but I do want to point out that ...

Hello! Thanks for requesting another review and for posting the next chapter. ^^ This is definitely a shorter length, which I imagine is because this is part one, but it ...

oh haii. I've been lagging on reading this story, but I know I will eventually read through the previous chapters again >:D The action game is strong in this section, ...

Hello again, and thanks for requesting another review. I've found this novel pretty enjoyable so far, so I'm certainly curious to see where the plot goes next. I think it's ...

Hello again! I am here for your second requested review. And whew, this does feel like a pretty long chapter. Just between Harry's and Rose's viewpoints would have been a ...

Hello! I just wanted to leave a comment on here to let you know that I've read the story to better understand chapter two. Special Agent Rosemary seems like an ...

Hello there. I'm very behind on this, but I have read various chapters throughout this whole novel, and I figured I would at least give a deserved review. In all ...

Hello there! I realized I had read this chapter a while back, but I never reviewed it, and so since I'm only two reviews away from my first blue review ...

Hello there again! I’m coming to the end of the currently posted chapters, and thus will be the last requested review, at least for right now. It’s been interesting to ...

Hello! I figured I would keep reading this story, but this chapter was definitely in its own league of dark/creepy themes. Having more of Jasper makes me a bit confused ...

Hi again! I was looking forward to a chapter update, so let’s go through the next events. I'm disappointed that Alice has turned "bad" and aligned herself with Donnovan. I ...

Hello there! I was curious to see where the rest of this chapter went, so I decided to head on to the second portion. So, the reader learns quite a ...

Hello there! I went to the next chapter in this novel that was still in the Green Room so that I can give you feedback on the newer sections. I ...

Hello! Thank you for requesting a review, and I hope this helps. You've gotten a whole lot of feedback on this already, so this might be a bit short, so ...

Hello! Thank you for requesting a review, and I hope this helps. I think you've gotten two nicely written out reviews so far, but I want to try to go ...