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Hey there! Straight off the bat, I'd like to say that this needs a little formatting help. The long paragraphs, while of course convenient, can turn off potential readers, which ...

Hello again! To start with, I really like the advancement of the backstories in this. I love being able to dive deeper into characters, and even if this is a ...

Hey! So, I’ve only seen the gameplay of Minecraft a couple of times, but I at least know what a “Creeper” looks like, so there’s that at least. And I’m ...

Hi! Here's a belated welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy it on here! To start off, although your narrator is very straightforward and blunt, the story feels a ...

Hey there! First off, I’m sorry about you feeling isolated in your current situation. Here’s to hoping things work out more for you or you find a good friend! Making ...

Hey amelie! To start off, I like your formatting on this. I always have fun following a poem back and forth, so thank you on that note. Separated stanzas usually ...

Hey Alliyah! So, to start off, let me get something off my chest — I hold an appreciation for poems that are straightforward without seeming simplistic, if that makes sense. ...

Hey! To start off, I’ve always loved learning about the Romans in my history classes. This definitely peaked my interest! I’m sorry I wasn’t able to find this before your ...

Hey! First off, sincere congratulations on writing so much! However, this length and format is what’s driving away readers, sadly. If you don’t have time to edit this fully, I’d ...

Hello! So this is a decent start for a poem. I will admit it took me a couple of readings to see how the abcde... linked up with the lines, ...

To start off, I did not anticipate that being the ending, so good job on that note. I also like the distinction between the interrogator and the other soldiers, including ...

You've done such a good job of creating this idea of growth and life in the reader's mind. The format works wonderfully, and the background image is spot on. One ...

If your work contains language, all you need to do is click on the edit button, and go to the second step of publishing your poem, past the type of ...

Hey there Sinister! Just me here for a short review. This might not be the best review ever, but since I'm very determined to get this out of the Green ...

That was interesting. You have this way of writing that is just so unique I almost don't believe it when I see it. As I'm an idiot sometimes, I almost ...