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Re: God's tears...
Hey there! I figured I would stop by and give you some feedback on this short story of yours! Since this, in fact, is a true short story itself, I ...
Sep 6, 2019 -
Re: Vampire’s Bride - A BTS Fanfiction
Hi there! I wanted to give you a little advice on posting works on YWS much like Pan did below me. I would really recommend trying to review a few ...
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: Maiden of Amhrán
Hey there! There are quite a lot of interesting fantasy stories all around in the back of the Literary Works section, and you're the writer of quite a few of ...
Sep 5, 2019 -
Re: Singer's Choice
Hello there! It being Review Month, I figured I would step back into the past days of writing on this lovely website. As thus, I'm here to provide some feedback ...
Sep 3, 2019 -
Re: A Chance For Hearts (Thoroughly Revised)
Hey there! Last year for Review Month I decided to review a bunch of super old works in the database so that all works can receive two (or true) reviews. ...
Sep 3, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (34)
Hi again queen bee, figured I'd stop by again especially because I at least know where both parties are currently. My thoughts currently: Ahh Gideon my sweet dude, please don't ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (33)
Hey there queen bee! Dropping by on this lovely Review Month to not only reach my quota of two reviews per day, but to also catch up on where my ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: Jaime (working title) chapter 1
Hey there! Welcome to the website, and I'm happy to see you're already contributing to this lovely writing society! This is quite a long chapter even though it's the first ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: A Janitor's Adventure: 2.2
Hey! Since I want to keep up the 50-review pace, I need to go for the second one today, and what better than the next lovely chapter of yours! The ...
Sep 1, 2019 -
Re: A Janitor's Adventure: 2.1
Hey there Bisc! Figured I'd swing around to kick off Review Month with the next part of this story. First of all, let's find out how Janny is faring here ...
Sep 1, 2019 -
Re: State to State - 4.3
Alright, I'm here once more to get at least the last part of the published chapters to get out of the Green Room. I have definitely enjoyed reading and following ...
Aug 25, 2019 -
Re: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - Ch. 9.1
Hello again. I've meant to officially review some of these chapters as I have in the old drafts of Vomit, but it's taken me quite some time. What really strikes ...
Aug 23, 2019 -
Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter Twelve
Hey there! I know I've skimmed through parts of this story in the past to shout out the chapters in Squills articles. I figured I should eventually toss my hat ...
Aug 22, 2019 -
Re: Nightmare
Hey there! I figured I would pop by and give a review on this poem of yours. I'll be using the YWS Critique Sandwich form, as it's a simple and ...
Aug 22, 2019 -
Re: What Hogwarts House Most Popular Among Potterheads?
As this is quite a casual form of an essay, I figured I'd give a quick little review to this work, either way, using the YWS Critique Sandwich format as ...
Aug 22, 2019
