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Re: Prince Derek and the Road to Nothyng Chapters 6 & 7
I like it more and more as you keep going. I think it's fine in terms of being dark, though I still don't think it only fits for children. I ...
Mar 17, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
It's funny how people are still going on about this. I didn't say anything rude, but people just keep going on and on. If someone saw something they thought seemed ...
Mar 17, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Yeah I know what I said. I know what I meant, if someone else takes it differently not much I can do about it. Tough love is like when truth ...
Mar 17, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Then you misread or misunderstood what I said. I pointed out a problem I saw, said why it's a problem, listed solutions to each. The easiest being simply the title. ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Wasn't too bring them down. Was an honest review. I said wtf because that ending is a contradiction like the entire story. And no I don't watch tv, or listen ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Yeah I know I spelled his name wrong. It's not easy to stay still after 20 or more energy drinks like monster and rockstar with the extra caffeine boost from ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Yeah I guess I missed it for not being mentioned more than once or twice, character names need to be emphasized when introduced. Once or twice is easy to miss ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Fading Colors
Your welcome
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
It doesn't make sense right now, it's hard to progress an unrealistic situation in a realistic setting.
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Honestly like I said it was only terrible when you decided to have him enter the house instead of calling the police to be safe. Because honestly seems like you ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Prince Derek and the Road to Nothyng Chapters 1-5
Good job again. I had apparently missed four without realizing it but read both newer ones now. Still loving the story. Looking forward to chapter 6.
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Fire and Ice [The novel] Chapter 4
I'm guessing Edmund is screwing with her again. This was good and I saw no misspelled words. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Fading Colors
Ok I loved this story, I have a feeling I know where it's going to go already but I will keep it to myself for now. I will say my ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Twin Blades chapter one
It was helpful thanks. I'm aware of my lack of proper punctuation, it's something I just don't understand at times and never really did. I do try to avoid typing ...
Mar 15, 2015 -
Re: Black Fire - Chapter 1
Yeah I pointed it out since someone would eventually. But you're welcome I loved the story.
Mar 15, 2015