kevin25a

Merci miss. Yup this was a rushed chapter, might have been half asleep but idk. I'll probably come back and redo all my stories one day though, for now I ...

It was about to when my laptop broke, but thanks to your help with my Google drive app I should be able to secure all my stuff better. I was ...

Well imagine being transported randomly hundreds of years forward in time, or on the flip side that you have memories from hundreds of years ago but none in the current ...

Yeah, at first I glared. But I trust her too, I know nothing would happen. :D That's fine by me, sending it too her to pass along. I admit I ...

You're happy, that's equally surprising to me. I figured given the way things are, my commenting would be REALLY awkward. I took several times longer than normal for that review ...

No no she wasn't avoiding commenting, she said she needed to take a little time to figure out how to write her review on it. Here is a line that ...

Um the dude who got hit was a random nobody, just like how in a movie nobody asks why don't the random people in the crowd get explained. They're extras, ...

Yeah punctuation is not my strong area, nor describing things. But thank you for the review, some thing I left out because I felt they weren't necessary, some because I ...

Actually now that you mention it I do have an idea to rework the scene, with the backstory behind Chelsea being the best knight in the kingdom at one point. ...

They're location is unspecified because they're in hiding, I did fail to explain the purpose of a guardian though. I will probably write a prologue later at some point, but ...

I didn't really pay much attention to the length of my chapters, this one did come out shorter than intended though. I don't see my understanding of commas improving much ...

Yup, and although commas are not my strong area, you have to admit I'm doing a lot better than when I wrote the first couple chapters. I'm a fast learner ...

Well the review is partly responsible for how an author ends up feeling about a chapter. Honest reviews lead to the best results. :D

Yeah I still feel like I'm giving the wrong impression with that review. :?

Yeah I still feel like I'm giving the wrong impression with that review. :?