kevin25a

I would not suggest mentioning you drink it. If you mention you drink it too it will hurt your case. Don't lie, but don't mention that you do either. Also ...

Okay I absolutely love the story, I really hope you continue it. This chapter was perfect, and out of the ones I read so far I really hope you do ...

I wouldn't call it terrible. But I assume you mean you write out an entire chapter, split it in two or three or as many as you need until you ...

I have only read one part before this, but I will definitely have to go back to read it when I have the time. I really liked the story, and ...

This was really good I will definitely have to go back and read the parts I haven't read yet. I would like to nitpick you wrote that using his syrin ...

I will start by saying I haven't read the previous chapters, but I will definitely do that when I have a day off work. This story is really good and ...

I really loved this story, I will definitely go back and read the previous two since I started here. I really look forward to your next chapters and would love ...

Sounds like it's going down for real hehe. Honestly I read the chapters I skipped before and still think a lot of the story is confusing beyond the general mouse ...

Well this is a Unique intro. And sounds like a Unique story. Honestly one paragraph is enough to get me curious, so feel free to let me know when you ...

It always seems like each new chapter is completely disconnected from the previous one, and the one that will follow. Never explaining how things got from where you left off, ...

I liked this chapter even more than the first, mostly for the drama. I usually dislike drama, but I like how it turned out and how you did it. I ...

This story was good, but you had a typo in almost every large paragraph. You also failed to separate a couple paragraphs properly. Anytime during a conversation when the one ...

I liked it but confused on a couple things. How much time had past since the last chapter? How do anyone get reported missing in a short period of time, ...

This is a beautiful starry. And all too common, it's worse when shitty parents like that are in the situation too. Being bullied at school, then when you return home ...

This was good, a different kind of story. It's sad but teachers and principles are like that, they seem to act like a student is obligated to say something. I ...